by Razorblade Lies Jan 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I'll write about me thoughts, |
Ok...I gave you a 4/5 because I thought the flow wasn't all that great to some of the lines. It got better near the end, but I thought it could've had more flow to it. I liked the rhyming scheme you used though...Never seen it done like that before. Unique. I like unique. =) 4/5 xoxo |
by dee
Amazing.. really cute. my favourite parts |
by aDORKable x3
Awww it's soo good! you really love your man!! hope everything works wout for ya! |
by MBG
That was super sweet(tear). Keep up the good work |