Awesome poem, i love it! keep it up!

Verry good

I really like it i mean like i'm not just saying that i mean it hits you hard. yano? i mean like you don't....(searchs for word) you don't sugar coat what you say i mean like it really makes people think about it because like it happens in reality.

This is really strong. it has a rhyth to it that pulls you though and seems to speed up, almost like a sence of ugency as you gget towards the end. really like the way you wrote it.

5/5

Wow alyson I love your poems keep up the good work. Thanks for the comment.

I really loved your poem I gave it a 5/5. It flowed really well. I can't wait to read more of your poems. Thanks for your commit I think you too have a great talent.

Great poem. i like the why you repete the line "To the Cry of Suicide" it really enforceiced it

5/5

Hey i really like this poem, again nice rhyming, good word choice, and its a really strong poem. Well Done!

Yours Sincerely

Andrew Kirkman

Jolly good, if I do say so myself, sad yet true, suicide is unfortuantly a fact of life and everyone thinks about it at least once

That poem is really deep. It's so sad how people can just take their own lifes.. Great write

I loved this one......it's quite sad but great poem and kept along with the topic great!

This is very sad poem and you stayed on topic to!
Awsome job

-Josiah

The first stanzas were exleent. it got a bit confusing after that. some of the words seemed a bit forced. but i loved it. the idea was original and you did a great job

Ruby

This was really good! And i must say it`s sad that alot of people have to feel that way. But it`s good to know that you not alone, You might not have people around you that understand, But theres millions of people who are feeling the exact same!
Keep up the great work! 5/5 =]

luv natalie x-x-x

This poem really touched me as my mum killed herself, this another great piece of wrk def another 5 vote keep writing hun sarah x

I love this poem. It's my favorite. Aly you're awesome.

Incredible rhyming. Some of the rhythm seemed a bit off, but I'm not sure. Sometimes I just read things wrong. And it's sad, how a lot of people feel like that. Makes me wish I could help =/

I loved the repetion of "to the cry of suicide"
great poem hun

much love and many kisses,
bex