by brown eyes and a melancholy smile Jan 12, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
Death's campaign |
by Leah20
Very very good. This poem was really powerful and very well worded. Keep up the awesome work! |
Excellent imagery. Great job. An interesting piece with great thoughts portrayed within. |
by HOLLY ARMER
Powerfully written! The imagery in the ending alone was enough to bring me to my feet, well done! |
by Darien
A very good poem, I support most of your ideas. War is however, necessary in some cases. IF you would like examples, I am more than happy to tell you :) |