Good poem i think it could even be made into a song.
Good work

I'll have to say "I have a lump in my throat" after reading this. So glad you reposted. I'll be checking out some others now.

Gary,

This is a sad mournful but beautiful piece.

Regards,

Steve

Your so talented omg ur poem is so good.. please check out my new one!! mwa stephy :)

Very interesting Piece --- I believe we a can have a second chance

You have a beautiful way of saying so much in so little! the last stanza makes you stop and reread the entire poem again and again.
how true that once lost, some things can never be found again!

I love the last lines of this poem... ****And I hadn't realized until I died
that your love was the only thing
keeping me alive.****

GREAT POEM