Life is wrong without you

by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]   Jan 12, 2006


I can't take any of my life anymore
i can't get up I've been pushed to the floor

everything i lived for has all gone wrong
i try to act happy and pretend like I'm strong

when I'm home alone i just burst into tears
trying to think what my life will be like in a few years

will i be here? and what will i do??
i can't live this life knowing its without you!

i have given you my everything but you just walked away
you never cared about me when i said i won't be OK!

I'm sorry I'm not good enough and I'm sorry you have to go
I'm sorry you don't love me but my love will always grow!

my broken heart is bleeding and it will never heal
the words you spoke had a big affect on how i feel

you said you don't love me and now my life is bad
everything is getting worse, i can't stop myself from being sad

i really don't care about my life or if i just die
i don't care i really don't i just want to say goodbye

hey people this poem isn't very good i just needed to let out my feelings

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Babe stop putting yourself down, for starters..
    and secondly. I know how this is hurting you...i can see the toll it's taking. i cant write much now, but know that you are never alone, and believe it or not, heartbreak does fade..eventually.
    I love u bestie, u're my everything.
    mwa -XoXoXoXoXoXoXoXoXoXoXoX

    PS: wen i come over..we can mope together while eating yummy ice cream/chocolate..:P

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Yeah, I agree with Emma, any poem that lets out emotion is good, and this one is no exception. Well done, keep writing.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    I think its very good! and also really sad, try and stay strong huni. and keep on writing coz it really will help to get ur feelings out.
    take care :) xxxxxx

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