Comments : The New Kitchen Knife

  • 18 years ago

    by Serenity

    Wow...This is really good. It is awsomely expressive and I love your choice of words. They flow very well.

    ^_^ keep on writing

    ~*~serenity*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by mydearestsuicide

    Awesome babe i kno the feeling keep it up(the writting of course)

  • Hey huni! i love this p0em s000oo0 much!! i n0 h0w y0o feel but please dnt cut, i no im a hyprcrite 4 saying that but u have so much in st0re 4 y0o nD it hurts me when y0o write stuff like this saying h0w y0o have cut c0z i care ab0ut y0o nD i dont want anything 2 happen 2 y0o!! remember i am always here 4 y0o ok?? babe y0o can always trust me nD tell me stuff c0z im here....i l0ved the p0em th0 it had s0 much meaning in it! 5/5~!
    luv y0o always maddy xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesslyn

    Thats an amazing poem-5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Am I Your Favourite Horse

    Wow your such a great writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by ...Wanna-be Poet...

    I cannot belive how talented you are!..Seriously, every time you write another poem I'm amazed that you keep getting better and better; you always raise the bar that tiny bit!...Man, You're so good!....I'm not going to be writing many poems (if any) anymore...I promised a friend that I'll stop cutting (for real this time, lol) and that's the inspiration for my poems...I'll continue to read yours though, Keep Writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShatteredAngel

    Ahh, shit that's good..!! I'm gonna check out your other poems.. Very well done. =) xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by No one

    This is an amazing poem its mirroring my own life, ive been stealing my mums kitchen knifes to cut myself and your poem just hit me that i shouldnt do it anymore. the rhyming in your poem is amazing. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Thanku so much every1, ur comments mean a lot to me xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by X-Fallen Angel-X

    Wow, i reli lyk this poem i love the rhyming and i can totally relate with what your saying, very powerful.. keep writing hun love ur poetry!

    luv always

    X-Fallen Angel-X

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Really nice. and it flows so nicley. . . keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    That's so true, you almost make me want to pick up a knife, but I promised I wouldn't. Damn Girl that's incredible!

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Thanku :) xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by x325xRunawayTrainx103x

    I'm in love with your writing :X haha which is a good thing! awesome poem and writing, i can relate to it... keep on rockin!

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Well done!
    this poem flowed so well and had purpose as well as ryhme
    i liked the opening stanza ALOT!
    good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I thought this poem was great emma. It so expressive and i know exactly how u feel, keep up with the poems and just hold on.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Thanks for reading my poem and this was such a strong emotions kind of poem but it was great to read and full of information so the reader can get a clear picture of what you are saying. keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Brook

    Awe..so sad but i understand. I love your poems so much..you truly are talented =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    I thought i commented, but i did not lol, awesome poem hammer as always, love you lots x

  • 18 years ago

    by Katey

    OMG!! you are such an amazing poet, no lie!! You rock gurl, i'm interested in talking more though, but not here where everyone can see, if you want email me at trouble_2_much@yahoo.ca later