by Serenity
Wow...This is really good. It is awsomely expressive and I love your choice of words. They flow very well. |
Awesome babe i kno the feeling keep it up(the writting of course) |
Hey huni! i love this p0em s000oo0 much!! i n0 h0w y0o feel but please dnt cut, i no im a hyprcrite 4 saying that but u have so much in st0re 4 y0o nD it hurts me when y0o write stuff like this saying h0w y0o have cut c0z i care ab0ut y0o nD i dont want anything 2 happen 2 y0o!! remember i am always here 4 y0o ok?? babe y0o can always trust me nD tell me stuff c0z im here....i l0ved the p0em th0 it had s0 much meaning in it! 5/5~! |
by Jesslyn
Thats an amazing poem-5/5 |
Wow your such a great writer. |
I cannot belive how talented you are!..Seriously, every time you write another poem I'm amazed that you keep getting better and better; you always raise the bar that tiny bit!...Man, You're so good!....I'm not going to be writing many poems (if any) anymore...I promised a friend that I'll stop cutting (for real this time, lol) and that's the inspiration for my poems...I'll continue to read yours though, Keep Writing! |
Ahh, shit that's good..!! I'm gonna check out your other poems.. Very well done. =) xxx |
by No one
This is an amazing poem its mirroring my own life, ive been stealing my mums kitchen knifes to cut myself and your poem just hit me that i shouldnt do it anymore. the rhyming in your poem is amazing. keep it up! |
by xEmmax
Thanku so much every1, ur comments mean a lot to me xxxxx |
Wow, i reli lyk this poem i love the rhyming and i can totally relate with what your saying, very powerful.. keep writing hun love ur poetry! |
by Danielle
Really nice. and it flows so nicley. . . keep up the good work. |
That's so true, you almost make me want to pick up a knife, but I promised I wouldn't. Damn Girl that's incredible! |
by xEmmax
Thanku :) xxxx |
I'm in love with your writing :X haha which is a good thing! awesome poem and writing, i can relate to it... keep on rockin! |
Well done! |
by Amanda
I thought this poem was great emma. It so expressive and i know exactly how u feel, keep up with the poems and just hold on. |
by Amanda
Thanks for reading my poem and this was such a strong emotions kind of poem but it was great to read and full of information so the reader can get a clear picture of what you are saying. keep it up :) |
by Brook
Awe..so sad but i understand. I love your poems so much..you truly are talented =) |
by Stabbylou
I thought i commented, but i did not lol, awesome poem hammer as always, love you lots x |
by Katey
OMG!! you are such an amazing poet, no lie!! You rock gurl, i'm interested in talking more though, but not here where everyone can see, if you want email me at trouble_2_much@yahoo.ca later |