This is a sad topic. And I have to say I am disapointed in you for lying to yourself.

But I don't know all the details, so I don't really have the right to critisize.

Anyways, this poem is very good. But it is so sad, the only thing that I dislike is that you did not capitalize the word "I" and also, your curse words, I know they have spaces, so what they were allowed to be published? Some little kid who reads it will still be ablte to read it, it's not like they don't know what a space is.

Anyways, 5/5. Keep up the good work