Awesome job lissa,
i love the part like a cake i can't stop eating, it's a very sweet poem

Thnxs ;)

This poem sounds fimilar like one of my poems i wrote before but anyway nice poem

A wish I cant stop wishing....inspired em to write a new poem. You really have a way with your words that draw your reader in

What a sweet poem, great job, hey can u check out my poem Its really over, THANKS!!!

PB

EXCELLENT To me id say the best one i've read that was GREATNESS right there Whoa....Truly Great..have you ever thought about makin a Rap, you may not like it....but you had the potential to rap...i can see it...i rap too and its not rap either most of mine area bout life...Great poem though excellent excellent excellent 5/5