Comments : Deceit, Defeat....episode repeat

  • 18 years ago

    by Allie

    Wow i love the subject and it wasnt extremely clear but ti amde u think for your self

  • 18 years ago

    by _-*Broken*-_

    Great poem, u write very good.well done

    Take care, the best for u in the futer.

    XxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 poem....u are a very good writer! i liked the entire poem so 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    Wow what a great poem the ending was exelent. I believe that the ending is the key to a poem and you hit it on the money. Also i wanted to add that in the contest your poem was great i had you in the top 4 all the way I really enjoyed reading it if there was a 4th you had it. thank you for entering and making such great contest see ya

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Well done, the expression in this poem was beautiful, highest praises for this one.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    1 word: Wow.

  • 18 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    I LOVE ALL YOUR POEMS YOU ARE AN EXCELLANT POET