by LittleMissImperfect Jan 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I rest my pen down again |
by aimee
Wow that is so beautiful and sweet and ur a great writer, |
by MBG
That was really amazing i give it a 10. keep up the good work |
by N J Thornton
Overall a good write. You have some forced rhyme in stanza two and four. The poem had a fluent flow and has some original ideas. Keep writing. |