A W E S O M E!!!!!

Thats all I have to say

I luv the rhyming.. nto easy to do for suree

Oh my JESUS.
that was.... so far beyone everything i have and ever could do. you're word use is AMAZING. F U C K I N G AMAZING.
THIS IS MY VERY FAVORITE.

Woow!u r amazing coz u write from ur heart and imagery used are jst awesme..5/5 luv ya take care

Hey its me. this was a wonderful poem. increadible!! it is so powerful, and so strange. the rhyming was perfect, and the title was very well thought of. well done!!

Ruby

Omg...this is amazing...keep writing!!

Very well written cntemperary dark poem

I thought this was fantastic, though there are only 3 votes! If I could, I would vote multiple times...all 5's!
*VioletRaven*

Wow, that was incredible! 5/5 without a doubt! I loved it!