BBV

by Lilninja   Jan 12, 2006


There's something inside me burning my veins black.
I feel as I have betrayed all that I know.
And that I can't speak out my own words.
There's something inside me trying to take control and make me its own.

My veins are burning black.
The blood rush has stopped in its tracks, trying to work its way back through.
Without turning red or blue.
All the openings have closed and there's no way I can cut through.

My veins are burning black, and soon all that is n me will be the same to.
Without the light outside you can't see me.
Cause in the darkness I will fade.
Every other day comes and no one seems to notice my fake smiles or, my burning black veins.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arsalan D

    I enjoyed reading your poem. Some of the lines really hit you hard and you could relate to it. It was well written and good imagery

  • 18 years ago

    by Tasha Caskey

    Wow, Manda, this one is great:).....you are real talented...u're so gonna be famous one day.....YAY!..im gonna have a famous best friend..!!!..:D...lol, i love yas...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nicole

    Being fake is really hard on ppl, I know from experience, but then I met somebody that completly turned my life around, & every day I look at how profoundly He is changing me, His name is Jesus Christ, you'v probably heard of Him before, it's not just a fad, not just something ppl say, He's real & alive, He cares about & watch's you everyday, burden's are so much easier to bear when you arn't carrying the weight, think sbout it ok?
    thank's.
    Jesus bless you*
    ~nicole.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    Thanks for the comment amanda, means a lot
    Well done on this poem great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    Yes. I understand. It's great! :D

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