I hope people get wat i'm trying say and understand the feeling..thanxs for comments n votes :)

Yes. I understand. It's great! :D

Thanks for the comment amanda, means a lot
Well done on this poem great job

Being fake is really hard on ppl, I know from experience, but then I met somebody that completly turned my life around, & every day I look at how profoundly He is changing me, His name is Jesus Christ, you'v probably heard of Him before, it's not just a fad, not just something ppl say, He's real & alive, He cares about & watch's you everyday, burden's are so much easier to bear when you arn't carrying the weight, think sbout it ok?
thank's.
Jesus bless you*
~nicole.

Wow, Manda, this one is great:).....you are real talented...u're so gonna be famous one day.....YAY!..im gonna have a famous best friend..!!!..:D...lol, i love yas...5/5

I enjoyed reading your poem. Some of the lines really hit you hard and you could relate to it. It was well written and good imagery