Break My Heart

by Shan   Jan 12, 2006


Break my heart,
Hope to die.
Hear my screams,
And see me cry.

I've got to find a way,
To get over you somehow.
No matter how hard I try,
I can't describe the pain I'm feeling now.

I wanted you to hold me.
Instead you pushed me far away.
I have to keep telling myself,
That I'll someday be okay.

What am I supposed to do,
Now that I can't trust my mind or my heart?
Your love used to be what held me together.
But is now pulling me apart.

So you might have broke my heart,
But I'll make you hope to die.
I hope my screaming brings you pain,
And you hurt as you watch me cry.

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  • 18 years ago

    by tomuchhurt

    Poetry comes so easily to you, dosent it? wow you are an amazing writer and again i can realate to this poem too.
    5/5
    XOXOXOXO
    Kamille

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I agree with Sonia, that was my favorite part of the poem. But the whole thing was beautiful. I love all the emotion you show in your poems. Thay are all so thought provoking and deep. You are an amazing poet.
    Thank you for the comment it means a lot to me. And I don't know why no one else enjoys your poems as much as I do :P because they are amazing.
    Anyway, once againg awesome poem.
    5/5 for sure
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by sonia

    This poem was great keep writing. i espically loved this part.

    So you might have broke my heart,
    But I'll make you hope to die.
    I hope my screaming brings you pain,
    And you hurt as you watch me cry.

    that part was great cus i loved how u just mayde it out there that u wanted him to feel the way that he mayde u feel. Keep writing because like i really enjoyed reading that poem

  • 18 years ago

    by StormShadow

    This poem starts with a fast beat, uve done a done a good job of capturing how it feels to be heart broken. keep up the good work!

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