This poem starts with a fast beat, uve done a done a good job of capturing how it feels to be heart broken. keep up the good work!

This poem was great keep writing. i espically loved this part.

So you might have broke my heart,
But I'll make you hope to die.
I hope my screaming brings you pain,
And you hurt as you watch me cry.

that part was great cus i loved how u just mayde it out there that u wanted him to feel the way that he mayde u feel. Keep writing because like i really enjoyed reading that poem

I agree with Sonia, that was my favorite part of the poem. But the whole thing was beautiful. I love all the emotion you show in your poems. Thay are all so thought provoking and deep. You are an amazing poet.
Thank you for the comment it means a lot to me. And I don't know why no one else enjoys your poems as much as I do :P because they are amazing.
Anyway, once againg awesome poem.
5/5 for sure
Breanna

Poetry comes so easily to you, dosent it? wow you are an amazing writer and again i can realate to this poem too.
5/5
XOXOXOXO
Kamille