by Toni Jan 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Tears cascade in their familiar pattern |
by confusion
So much is said, and yet its just short. not too short though, just right. perfect infact. the ending line is perfectly powerful and almost blunt too. but just not quite. brilliant. im starting to babble now lol. but yeah, fantastic, as always |
by deadnalone
Very good!! short bt very good i luv it well i dnt lyk u feelin lyk that bt its a good poem |
I have missed your poems sweety....This one is so amazing, like all of your other poems, I can relate so much to this one....today when I woke up, I just wanted to go back to sleep.... |