Beautiful and sweet! Great job girl. I love it.

Beautifully written Chels .......
I love to write the occasional non ryhming poem because I find you can really express your feelings alot better than trying to choose the right words to make it ryhme.....
Great job Chels !!!!!!!

A beautiful job with this non-rhyming poem Chelsey....it shows your love for Eirisa, a true friend at heart....loved it

love ya, Ann

What can I say Chelsey? I'm sorry I've moved house and I'm not online anymore, so i have to wait until i am at university to check mail, poems etc. BUt this was worth the wait for sure.

You're a sweet girl Chelsey and a very clever young poet. I get the feeling I'll be reading your poems one day between the pages of a hardcover book. If they still exist! :o)

Such a beautiful and heartfelt write for someone so special......

Hey! This is a great poem! This is how I feel about my best friend, and older sister in my heart....she lives 2000 miles away. But believe me, you aren't living in a fantisy world, if you want something to happen, go for it...maybe one day you will me her. I hope you will, I know I want to meet my best friend. Keep up the great work, this is an awesome poem!

Weird no no no! A fantastically unique style for Chelseys writing yes yes yes. Wow I'm blown away Chelsey like WOW I miss you soooooo much on the holidays too not a night or day passes that you dont fill my thoughts or enter my prayers and not a single moment goes by that I dont wish with all my heart I could be there for you like a real sister should...this is your best poem yet Chelsey, not rhyming is def something you should try more often I found this piece so effective and touching...the first two or three stanza - captivating Chelsey *wipes one tear of love and one of pride, both for Chelsey*
God bless you Chelsey Lynn the way you have been such a welcome blessing to my life...