Comments : Perpetum

  • 18 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    I really like this poem, it really reflects the style all your poetry has. I love the way they are all so self-reflective, and theyre like a complex rhetorical question. I just loved the way you used you language and how effective it is in such a short and concise poem. it reads very well and very easily as well. Very well written!

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Wow really good, good quetion and great way of putting it. Never would have thought of makeing one up like that.........awesome

    -ann
    -promise kept

    Ps I was in the disscussion forum!@!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dana

    Very intriguing....what is light? very good question....poems are the greatest when they make you think. Well done! This poem flowed quite well...and was just interesting!!! I loved it! 5/5