Maniac

by Nahibi Maldonado   Jan 13, 2006


It's been a year
Since you haven't been here
Sad and crying
You left me dying

It's been a year
and this pain, I cannot bear
Feeling sorry for all I've done
And wishing that I was gone

I love this guilt
That has been built
Maybe it was me
But promise it wasn't meant to be

It's been a year
Still have this fear
That the one that's next
Will surely be for the best

** This poem is about a guy who has a mental illness and he has to kill, but after-wards he just regrets it.**

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  • 16 years ago

    by shenoa

    Good job tapping into his mind. "I love the guilt" I love this line, it makes us see why he can't stop.

  • 16 years ago

    by shenoa

    Good job tapping into his mind. "I love the guilt" I love this line, it makes us see why he can't stop.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Nahibi this is a good poems from teneka

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Amazing poem....I know it has been a while, I just wanted to stop by and tell you that I like your poem a lot. Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    Wow that was deep i hearts it babes ^_^

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