Your Torture/My Pleasure

Nitin
Your poems always move me in some way. This is such a sad piece, yet you show the hope at the end. Excellent job!

these hands of mine
have lost direction forever
these feets have just given up
they probably walk never

This stanza really touched me. To feel this kind of dispare is a terrible feeling. Yet you have turned it around. I felt every painful word.
Love Cindy

"so much addicted to your torture
may take whatever you find remaining in me"

It's true, you can get addicted to anything after being sujected to it long enough, my mother in law is addicted to tea! Really addicted, lol
And i'm addicted to your poems =)
5/5
*Gem*

I think this poem describes everyone's life at some point. Yeah, been there done that. As a matter of fact, I dont think this feeling is ever gone completely. Once in a while it all comes back again. What is important is that you keep your hope and you keep your faith. Anyways, amazing work once again.

Wonderful. i love it. by the way, thank you for your offer and comment. keep writing. if u have a gift use it!

Ruby

Omg, another great piece of work. Though I have to agree with Steph, you do need to go back and reword some of the lines. It may make more sense:) But other than that I thought it was phenomenal..i think i spelt that wrong.. oh well.
xoxo Monique