Hi nitin!
very beautifully written. ur dark poems are so gud. i liked the words
but sorry to say i couldnt understand the theme behind this.
i hope u will make this clear to me.
take care
Bharti

Indeed its inspirational to set example , God never let us down .Bad times are only to test us and make us better person .
Nice work.

Best regards
chavii.

WOW... What makes you feel this???
I really need to know...
Gosh, that poem had so much sadness and sorrows in it.. though, i liked the ending...5/5
Love you lots...

Much love,
Ipsita

Omg, i luvved it!!! its like how i am now, i was teased in jh, but now im just like w/e, and the "popular kids!!!", dude, dfine popular!!! lol

Another great poem. I really like your work. The only thing I saw that didn't quite rub me the right way in this poem, was this line :

this heart do sometime beats
though will is lost

I think maybe if you worded it something like this, it might fix up a little :

This heart still beating steady,
though will is lost

Or something like that. But other than that it was another well written poem. And you can definatley disregard all of that if you like, write for yourself, to keep you happy right? :) Great job!!

I like it and I think it says a lot. Keep up the good work. *5/5* You can check out some of mine if you want.

Omg, another great piece of work. Though I have to agree with Steph, you do need to go back and reword some of the lines. It may make more sense:) But other than that I thought it was phenomenal..i think i spelt that wrong.. oh well.
xoxo Monique

Wonderful. i love it. by the way, thank you for your offer and comment. keep writing. if u have a gift use it!

Ruby

I think this poem describes everyone's life at some point. Yeah, been there done that. As a matter of fact, I dont think this feeling is ever gone completely. Once in a while it all comes back again. What is important is that you keep your hope and you keep your faith. Anyways, amazing work once again.

"so much addicted to your torture
may take whatever you find remaining in me"

It's true, you can get addicted to anything after being sujected to it long enough, my mother in law is addicted to tea! Really addicted, lol
And i'm addicted to your poems =)
5/5
*Gem*

Nitin
Your poems always move me in some way. This is such a sad piece, yet you show the hope at the end. Excellent job!

these hands of mine
have lost direction forever
these feets have just given up
they probably walk never

This stanza really touched me. To feel this kind of dispare is a terrible feeling. Yet you have turned it around. I felt every painful word.
Love Cindy