Nice write, very sweet. this piece is beautiful. great job

Very touching superb write! Well done my friend a great tribute!

0h h0w sweet. a t0uching write..beautifully dedicated f0r ur little sister. very well written. keep it up darl!! =)

l0tz 0z l0ve / d0ra
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Awww Darien, that was a sweet poem. Very touching :-) Beautiful as always my friend. Thank you so much for your sweet comment on my poem... I know you care my friend, and so do I. Take care... hugs.

Thats really sweet!

Thats really sweet!

Thats one of the best familly poems good job man

DARIEN! OMG! THis was such a sweet dedication to Kristy! OMG...we should get married so Kristy can be my sister-in-law lol jk ...ok im not..*blushes*...terrific write again Darien..bravo..well done!

Such a beautiful and touching write for someone so special.......

I really like the words you used to connect your poem to rhyme.its really good.great job!!!!!!have a good one

Wow i really like this poem and that you can tell someone that you believe family. i really like it, it made me think of my sister. except she is older than me.

Aww thats so sweet. you must be a good big brother.

Awww. That was so sweet. I wish I had a big brother =[ Lol But this was a really good poem. Yesh. I really liked the first stanza. It was coool. 5/5

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