Fade Away

Nitin
Excellent style. Word choices are great. This is so touching. It hit me right in the heart.

Life
stood still till i turned gray
Love
just never came my way
And I
fade away
fade away

These lines were really heartfelt.
Hope love comes your way. I pray you never fade away.
Love Cindy

This was short but had so much meaning behind it. I loved how it ended, it really fit in well. I think this has got to be one of your best pieces :) Awesome work.

Short simple concise and full of feeling. very good.

5/5

Awsome poem. So short yet so deep. I love your poems. They are all soooo deep. I very much appreciate deepness.

OMgosh.. I love love love it. Seriously, it's short and simple but the emotions are very touchable, real and great! well done...

love,
~* TasH *~