My Bloody Valentine

by Darien   Jan 13, 2006


My Bloody Valentine

Another dreadful night,
under these sinister skies.
The crimson moon so bright,
as the stars dance like fireflies.

Eros your arrows are cursed,
pierce my skin and hit my heart.
For her touch I now thirst,
upon my lips her poison dart.

A reckless encounter we share,
as I watch your wicked grin.
Walk away and see if I care,
your love was a deadly sin.

I hear an eerie sound,
as it bleeds through my ear.
My favorite song in the background,
In this moment you should fear.

I want this floor painted red,
with blood the body's lotion.
In my mind I see you dead,
and I cannot control this emotion.

Scattered across this floor,
the heart I never did love.
I always wanted more,
and you, I got sick of.

The morning when I awake,
I breathe this sweet decay.
my lovers life I did take,
Her body left to rot away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kathleen

    I love this poem. Very dark!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    A few lil things-
    with blood the body's lotion
    there needs to be a break after blood.(comma)

    Scattered across this floor,
    the heart I never did love.
    I always wanted more,
    and you, I got sick of.
    it seems to me that this rhyme was slightly forced. it did nto flow as well as the rest.
    what i liked- i lovedthe metaphors and descriptions and language in this one. it was amazing(except^)
    i loved this part here-
    Eros your arrows are cursed,
    pierce my skin and hit my heart.
    For her touch I now thirst,
    upon my lips her poison dart.

    it just was. amazing.

    Great Job. =]

    x3 Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    You write amazing dark poems. I love this. I ususally choose which stanzas I love the best and... I love them all! You are amazing! You vocabulary and your rhyming is something for me to envy.

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this one as well.
    it was so dark and powerful, and as always, I enjoyed your rhyme scheme and use of imagery.
    Keep up the good work, another 5/5 from me.
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    With blood the body's lotion
    ((This should read, if I read it right:
    with blood - the body's lotion))

    Otherwise I really liked the poem.. It was strong and confident and very dark. And it wasn't something you hear everyday. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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