That was a crazy but damn fine poem .. ur really good darl ..keep the fantastic work ..

anasha
xox

That was awsome! You are a good writer. Keep up the awsome work and I better hear more from u!

I don't even know how to explain how amasing this poem is. I think that your an amasing wrighter. Kepp up the good work, And i'll be watching for some more of your's
~*ChLoE*~ xox

Hey.. great poem i really loved all the emotion! well sone mwa.. please chek out mine if ya can! XOXo stephy :)

That is a cool write. The words were great and the flow excellent. Nice job.
~The Unforgiven

Wow this is like really deap....i love it

Hey, you dont know me but i just wanna say your really talented keep it up yea x

Simply beautiful, I always prefered dark mindset of love.

Wow. thats pretty deep. but good poem. keep it up

-autumn

This is a great poem with an awesome flow but there was one line that kind of broke it off for me.

I want this floor painted red,
with blood the body's lotion.
In my mind I see you dead,
and I cannot control this emotion.

With blood the body's lotion, that was a little confusing and caused me to read it many times, thus, it broke off the flow. So, I went back and read the whole poem again after. Great job.

Wow that was an amazing poem, I really enjoyed reading it, I loved the last stanza it rounded the poem off perfectly, dark and gripping well done!

Your one of the best male writers ever, i love your poems.

Awe so sad but such a different write! I Love dark poems! They keep me on my toes! Awesome job with this your a amazing writter

This is a good poem:-)

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.

Sad one... well written.. loved the rhyme.. sounds like a song

Peace~

Wow.. this was powerful.. but it confused me a little.. i didn't really understand.. did you kill her? lol.. if so, very scary! :P nice write! 5/5

Dang, Love, Hate, and Realization all in one poem ... THATS GOOD!

Wow i loved this poem, it is one of the best ones by you that i have read so far

Wow! This is great. There is real passion behind your words leading to such a forceful and unexpected ending.
A brilliant attempt at capturing some very intense emotions.