by Bradley Peter Jan 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Have you ever tried to help someone, and they just spit in your face |
I really really like this! The rhyme scheme is great and it flows beautifully, however I do think the middle stanza is weaker than the start and finish and the wors 'but' is a bit over-used. Overall, really great! |
by Ike Dizzle
Man I know how you feel. I had the same problem. A girl I was going with for about a year cheats on me with my bestfriend then your okay cool well i'll leave it be. Then you try to be friends but she's only your friend when she needs a dollar or when she needs some. So eventually I just left it alone. I still see her and when she gets infront of me for a hug i still give her one but other than that i don't speak to her. |
by Jenni Marie
Ohhh I think I have fallen in love with your work haha. |
by Rachel RTVW
Sadly there are people like this...... People take advantage of you when they know they can. |
by *Charisma*
Great poem...sad when a friendship dies. it's something that hurts both parties. |