Nice poem. mans can sense da emotion ya get me!!! na seriously u shud ave mentioned da cow's name, dis is an international site ya know, so if she moves abroad, guys ave a warning!!!

Wow another amazing poem by Bradley!! i admire you sooo much!! your poems speak to me and i can feel what your saying and they are put together so beautifully it just gives me shivers down my spine!! thx much for your comment on my poem but it is not nearly as good as the poems you write!! your poems basically tell stories about my life!! its crazy!! keep it up!! 5/5!!

I dnt think NE1 dus no dis story of u 2 except her rite???
I du rly lrly rly yk dis poem tho not jus cs ov da content but it is a brilliantly written and well worded poem, that is truthful full of emotion which is poetically expressed.
and Charles, ur comment is rite, I mean der aint ppl left at newvic 2 warn cs most ov dem hve bin der n dun dat but 4 ova's it's all gud, dey culd du wit da warning lol.
Lots and lots and lots of love,
B xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

This poem is fantastic, great job, thanks for your comment meant alot.keep writing and take care sarah x

Beautiful, i love this one.
Mainly because I've never had a friend, and I've always been the 'saviour'.
And recently had my mind put through hell, bewcause of an isiot.
thank u so much for sharing this poetry.
I would like to ask you if you could comment and/or vote on my new poem, 'Forbidden Sacrifice'.
Because you seem to know what your doing and give decent comments that I can use constructively.
thank you
~Emma

Wow. i have to say this is one of my favorite poems you've written just becaause it hits close to home.

Great poem...sad when a friendship dies. it's something that hurts both parties.

Sadly there are people like this...... People take advantage of you when they know they can.

Ohhh I think I have fallen in love with your work haha.
The flow was flawless in this troughout, and I thought it to be very intense and hard hitting.
The imagery used, as always, was beautifully done.
I adore this.

Man I know how you feel. I had the same problem. A girl I was going with for about a year cheats on me with my bestfriend then your okay cool well i'll leave it be. Then you try to be friends but she's only your friend when she needs a dollar or when she needs some. So eventually I just left it alone. I still see her and when she gets infront of me for a hug i still give her one but other than that i don't speak to her.
-vino

I really really like this! The rhyme scheme is great and it flows beautifully, however I do think the middle stanza is weaker than the start and finish and the wors 'but' is a bit over-used. Overall, really great!