Picture This

by Letty   Jan 13, 2006


Picture the moonlight shining down
upon a lake, enveloping it in a
mysterious glow .

Picture this earth without pollution .
Picture it free of illness, disease,
and everyone lives to grow old .

Picture no worries, sadness or
murderous people on the loose .
Picture no more thoughts of
suicide or wanting to die .
Because love is there for you .

Picture all the things I said coming
true . Picture no more racist nature,
or discrimination, among me and
you .

Picture us all living as one .
Picture us prejudice proof .

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another great poem, i really enjoyed reading it, great job

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Really good peice, the content was berilliant and its a great image that you create. ironcally though by presenting "the perfect world" you make the reader (well me anyway, not sure about others) think about all the faults in the world we live in. but a great very well written peice

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    What a beautiful picture! I loved it and your desire for such a place was so honest it made the poem a complete masterpiece!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    This is a great poem. I loved every line of it. I also think about this world that you wrote about, it just seems that no matter what you do there is always a possiblility of something bad happening. On top of everything we have to go through in life, why do we have to add race, death, sickness, etc. I loved the topic and you wrote it well

  • 18 years ago

    by Reem O

    This is soo great,,ur really talented that you can make some one feel every single detail what u write in ur poem..AMAZING!!5/5

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