Beautiful. I loved it. Keep it up.

Wow - deep or what? fantastic =)

That's really good
well done

SWEET! That's all I can say. That is AMAZING! I love your poems. You've officially written your way right onto my faves list!! :D

This is soo great,,ur really talented that you can make some one feel every single detail what u write in ur poem..AMAZING!!5/5

This is a great poem. I loved every line of it. I also think about this world that you wrote about, it just seems that no matter what you do there is always a possiblility of something bad happening. On top of everything we have to go through in life, why do we have to add race, death, sickness, etc. I loved the topic and you wrote it well

What a beautiful picture! I loved it and your desire for such a place was so honest it made the poem a complete masterpiece!

Really good peice, the content was berilliant and its a great image that you create. ironcally though by presenting "the perfect world" you make the reader (well me anyway, not sure about others) think about all the faults in the world we live in. but a great very well written peice

5/5

Wow, another great poem, i really enjoyed reading it, great job