AMAZING!!!! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I know EXACTLY how this feels. It hurts so much but you put the feeling down on "paper" in the most amazing way.

amazin poem its such a gr8 peom keep it up hunzzz:D
peace

Ow... really nice... you express what ou feel in this poem.. it is on the best way how you put it on this poem.. i like it a lot... it makes me almost cry...,i am teribly sorry for your lost... be strong...

Omg DIS POEM IS SOOOO SAD AND GOOD AND I WANT TO CRY RITE DIS INSTANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good job...mayb u can read sum of my poems sumtime

xoxo
dina

Awwwww really good pooem!! good job, loved it

Hey i really like your poem..that's exactly how i feel when my ex cheated on me...

Its soo sad :( great poem tho 99/5 :)

I LOVE this poem, and actually, my bf name is steven too, and when i saw brown eyes, i was like hey thats like steven! and then i saw the name steven, and i was like whoa thats way too cool. so ya... nice job! :)

WONDERFUL POEM, KEEP IT UP.. But I have a question for ya guys... why do we LOVE someone?......... I been in love with someone for years but still so confuse WHY?.

So much emotion i am stunned!! literally! keep up the great work 5/5

Reminds me of an old love....very nice

That is sooo sad... its a really great poem though you seriously are like a really great poet.. and from wat your poem said.. that steven guy is a jerk.. you deserve better and one day you will find that guy.. the guy that is sooo much better.. the one you love more than everything.. the one that loves you just the same... good job though!

Aww that is cute n it is sad

This is beautiful!!!!

Thank you for all the comments i have found my true love i was married on june 18 2005 it will be 2 years this year i have a wonderful son he will be one may 26 his name is blake!!

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