Until I met you

by Letty   Jan 13, 2006


I use to be lonely, depressed,
lost, without a friend . Sad,
suicidal, and I felt like giving in .

I was down and out . A desperate
fool at the end of her rope's . I
didn't want to love again, because
I knew that love would hurt .

Until the day that I met you, my
life was changed around . You
gave me hope when no one else
would, and picked me up when I
was down .

I was so afraid at first, because I
thought you were to good to be
true . But you proved your real
in more way's then one . As if are
fate's were sealed .

I love you with every part of me,
and every breath that I own . I
know deep down the day will
come, when my home will be your
home

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    One of the greatest poem that i ever read in this site, you have put many strong words togheter and created a great poem, i can really relate to this poem, great job and 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    Very nice poem... a few grammatical errors but I do the same thing when I am evoking an emotion. It's not always about the perfect grammar but about the way it makes someone feel. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    Great poem really heartfilled and emotional. I had one problem with reading it tho. In the 3rd stanze you said Until the day I met you my life was changed around. When i read it it sounds like you should mean when i met you my life changed around. Also in the 4th stanze you wrote the word (are) and it should be (our). Other than that I loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Reem O

    Woow, I think every one can relate to ur poem who has this special person.Very emotinal 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    This one was good! 5/5

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