by LostSoul
This is really gooooooooooood and it is goooooooooood for you. Haha. Lol, great poem, let's honour for a while shall we? *moment of silence* Okay finished, keep up the good work, and if you don't then I will hurt you. Haha. 5/5 |
by Poetvoices
This is wonderful! It's so beautiful! Thanks for gracing me w/ the oppurtunity to read such lovely works!! 5/5. You never cease to amaze w/ your incredible talent. |
by obsessedgurl
This one was good! 5/5 |
by Reem O
Woow, I think every one can relate to ur poem who has this special person.Very emotinal 5/5 |
by Tim Bradshaw
Great poem really heartfilled and emotional. I had one problem with reading it tho. In the 3rd stanze you said Until the day I met you my life was changed around. When i read it it sounds like you should mean when i met you my life changed around. Also in the 4th stanze you wrote the word (are) and it should be (our). Other than that I loved it. |
by Kelly
Very nice poem... a few grammatical errors but I do the same thing when I am evoking an emotion. It's not always about the perfect grammar but about the way it makes someone feel. Great job. |
by Goran Rahim
One of the greatest poem that i ever read in this site, you have put many strong words togheter and created a great poem, i can really relate to this poem, great job and 5/5 |