by ReeneLou Jan 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Crimson blood running down your chin, lap it up know I\'ll never get it again, lying back dying within i don\'t understand what is happening, i may not die i may be mortal, but, is it worth the eternal torture? |
Excellent verry good use of words i like how you showed so much anger and sadness its was really good keep up the good work. |
by Roxy
Wow this is your best one I LOVED ITTTTTT its so god damn good hun u put so much effort into this i can tell you used you pasion and feelings and i loved the way you wrote this poem your way of puting it into word is define xoxoryxox |
Wow this is awsome i really liked it keep up the good work |
by Stabbylou
Wow, this is so busy, but enjoyable, it's heated and frantic which gets the passion and emotion across here. i don't know, great work xxx |
by ReeneLou
This is the first poem i ever wrote my sister asked me to write her a poem to copy for school and until then i haddnt really been interested but now im'm hooked i write daily in my journal about everything and nothing so if you like my poems you'd better thank mara my little sis who by the way is a really good writer to look out for her soon |