This is the first poem i ever wrote my sister asked me to write her a poem to copy for school and until then i haddnt really been interested but now im'm hooked i write daily in my journal about everything and nothing so if you like my poems you'd better thank mara my little sis who by the way is a really good writer to look out for her soon

Wow, this is so busy, but enjoyable, it's heated and frantic which gets the passion and emotion across here. i don't know, great work xxx

Wow this is awsome i really liked it keep up the good work

Wow this is your best one I LOVED ITTTTTT its so god damn good hun u put so much effort into this i can tell you used you pasion and feelings and i loved the way you wrote this poem your way of puting it into word is define xoxoryxox

Excellent verry good use of words i like how you showed so much anger and sadness its was really good keep up the good work.

xXthe-bleeding-scars-of-sorrowXx AKA:Sebastian