by Blutonium Boy Jan 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I'll miss your eyes so gentle and green, |
This is a really good poem and you did an excellent job relaying your feelings to the paper. |
Another fantastic piece, I really enjoyed the rhyming, it wasn't forced, and that can be hard to do sometimes. A beautiful rendition of love. The third stanza was particularly special. Well done, Greta xo |