Very good, Ramy good for you:)
beware though some points need to recheck them again...

I liked the rhymes, I like how you write, good poem 5/5 keep the good work up

Good work, the poem was well written and a great rhyme scheme.

Hey Ramy!! i told you i'd comment, didn't i?? huh??/ yeah! that's right, lol

i personally thought it was brilliant. it worked for me adn that's obviously the way i like it : 0

great work!! ttyl.
ur friend, Suzie

Mashaalah that was very beautiful
~sasha~