Comments : Spring has come at Last

  • 18 years ago

    by StormShadow

    Hey,

    beautiful poem! i love the lines:

    'My favorite lonely apple tree
    that has been bare so long,
    that sits deep down low in the valley,
    I find is no longer asleep.'

    the opening stanza is great too, i like the feel and tone of the whole poem, lots of really nice imagery too. great job!