Untitled....(needs a title any suggestions)

by Roxy   Jan 13, 2006


Eyes of fire
and a heart of gold
this sad girls life
was long untold

So perfect and happy
smiled all day
no one would think
her life would end this way...

A troubled soul
hidden far behind a mask
her happiness was
a long unfulfilled task...

She tried to over come
every lonely night
but after so long she gave up
and lost the fight...

she gave in to the deception
and made herself bleed
held tight to a razor
it was the only friend she would need...

soon her eyes of fire
turned cold and dim
and her heart of gold
became broke and unable to mend..

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Rachel*

    Hey This is Completely amazing... the emotions were sooo strong..... I think you should title it " An Unknown Story".... Just a thought!

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    I really liked this one... maybe you could title it eyes of fire... great write... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Becx

    Wow i really like and it has strong feeling 5/5