Brilliant!!! deepfully meaningful and poetic 5/5 =)

Thanks 4 commenting on my stuff to most ppl just ignore me lolll ........syner xxx ...nice work..im not very good at commenting sorry lol

This was a great piece of writing, and i especially liked the ending. i felt that this was a passionate poem that was full of depth and flowed extremly well. well done and i look forward to reading more from you.

Brad

P.S. thank you for commenting on my poem 'You Make Me Fly'. i appreciate all comments good and bad, as i fell they help me to improve my writing. so thank you

Very nice job.. i really liked this poem... it flowed well and was amazing.. keep it up... you defenitly have talent...

sammie

WOW! I really want this comment to express what I'm feeling but you honestly left me speechless! It's poets like you that inspire me (and there aren't too many of those). This is definatly one of my favorites! :)