I really really likr it, good job keep it up!!!

Wow. I absolutely loved this poem. Somehow I had the feeling you were talking to me. Though I know you are not. It brought tears in my eyes. I just.. it´s just as if it´s about me, and this situation I am in right now.

Though I hope that person will understand why I broke my promise, why I left, leaving her in tears, and why I lied about it all along.

I had no choice. These words could be hers. This poem really touched me..

Beautiful written Steph. I loved it girl

Lotsa love xxx

It's was sad poem, but really i like it how u used the words, espcially this part.....
You said you'd never go
But you left
You said you'd never lie
But that wasn't the truth
anyways keep it up the good, job...

Jammal

You did a great job on this poem, keep writing!

I love it!!
you can really feel each word!!
WOO gave me tingles!!
well done
lovies xxxxxxxxx

Sad but so dtrong and true. I love your writing style... You're certainling becoming one of my fav in this site... Just a request... Don't stop writing Please!

Just A Correction...
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