Hmm. I like this poem. Beautiful written. Pretty sad though.

I have an unfinished poem, which I'm probably never gonna finish, a little part of it is:

Damn what have you done?
You have cut your wrists!?
You should have used a gun!

But that poem is just so bad, I don´t feel like finishing it. But when I read you had to choice between pills, gun and a knife...... I felt like putting it here in my comment hahaha.

Also thank you for you comment. You are kind of right about the 2 different kind of poems put in one. That poem doesn´t flow for that reason. THough I haven´t put two poems together. I don´t know.. haha I don´t like that poem anyway. I wrote it for a friend, that past a way two years ago. I had a hard time writing that poem. But that´s not an excuse. Hah..

ANyway thanks for your honest comment.

Lotsaaa love xxx