by Samantha Jan 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
The boy who was always smiling |
by Daze
Good poem, but who is this nameless girl and why would he talk to her, it makes no sense, but the wording was good and it had a nice movement throughout the poem, but for as the actual story you were telling i'm not sure i understand it. |
by Amanda
Its really cute and sweet! I loved it and gave it 5/5 I hope more are like that good job ^_^ |
by Katlynn
I liked this alot. I got lost and confused some. Maybe i just read it wrong in a weird way of mine. But anyway this was cute. But i don't get why it's in a sad category. I mean yeah it was at the beginning but i dunno. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |
by .
Aww* this is so freakin cute!! I love it! Awesome job! 5/5 |
by Allison
That was a beautiful poem. I really liked the ending. You have a lot of talent so keep up the good work. *5/5* |