Very nice job... your poem had nice flow and a good story.. keep it up...

sammie

Great work. This poem was so sad, and so well written.

Amazing job once again. I really enjoyed it and you had a good flow going on. Very sad though and it was very creative of knowing that when a commitied suicide there was a ending prayer. You usely don't read that in most suicidual poems. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Very good poem, well written and ful of feeling

Im so sorry you hurt so much but ending you life is deff noth the answer.. life is full of pain but the happness is always somthing to look forward to.. keep your head up. nice poem tho

Diz is a wonderful poem and i really love it and i felt the same way before but then suddenly my life got happy and all i do is smile...this is great 5/5

That was very well written great job