Awesome poem!!! thank you so much for all your comments, they mean so much :D (sorry i couldn't get back sooner) anyways, keep up the great job!
-xXx-

Now that was just so DARK...scary 2 b honest...u really write good.

take care

I like this poem. Great job, but I don't really think that the second last verse is too good (not trying to be mean). Thank you for sharing this poem, as I feel that it is wonderful. 5/5 Keep up the good work.

This is the verse I was talking about:
Blood sucking creature out side my door
Loves the way the red blood pours
Watches me as I sleep alone in the dark
Filling my dreams with a horrible mark

Reminds me a LOT of Nightmare Before Christmas-Halloween. But thats okie. good poem and keep it up!

Gud poem.. pretty scary things to hv in dreams.. hope things are ok.. overall the rhyming was the best in my opinion and u got ur message across.. gud job
im sorry im just not a drak poems fan, but i know a gud poem wen i see one :D
thnx 4 ur nice comments
take care
Nouna

Nice poem, i think it kinda applies to everyone cos we all have scary things in our dreams lol well at least i do not sure bout spiders thou they are a little creepy anyways good work feel free to comment on my poems
Sleep sweet
*Incognito*

Great peice, flows very well

Oh man I really like this poem. Thanks os much for commenting on mine.

I loved the theme of this poem. It's really dark and scary!!!

That is really creepy.. I got the chills reading it.. Great write hun.. Kinda scary though.. Lol
!^I love being in love^!

Well well well, this is the poem you won second place with. And I still dig it;)

Kind've a weird poem but I like it. Its a diffrent form of writing a sad poem on this site but I like it still good job!!

-Josiah

You said this wasnt that good. But i dissagree =] I liked it. Loved the part about spiders. I hate spiders lol there so freaky lol
But good job! 5/5

luv natalie x-x-x

Wow this is kind of creepy..lol. You did a great job with it! 5/5**

Ahh scary. it made me think of spiders, i hate spiders. shudder lol they haunt MY dreams, i like this poem though!! well done hun

much love and many kisses,
bex