by stationaryfaerie Jan 14, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Held tightly |
by creeesta
This is an amazingly well written poem. I love to read poems like these, they really help me in my writting. Keep up the great work!! You are really talented. :) |
by Catherine
I love the imagery in this piece. And I can really connect with it... it's wonderful to find a poem that speaks to me, from someone who is my age. I feel less lonely. Thank you. |
by libby
This was very sweet, and I can't think of a more poetic image to evoke than sea glass. Unpredictable use of words gets me every time, and you've demonstrated this skill perfectly in this line: "and leave my throat a ball of tears and jagged cuts." Beautiful work, keep it up! |