Troubled girl

by hm   Jan 14, 2006


Her make up and hair messed up
her face so pale
her just trying 2 be happy
would always be something she would fail

she would hang out with her Friends
her fake laughter would kill her inside
all she wanted 2 do was hide till she would die...

her straggles got bigger
and would only grow
but nobody but her new her pain
i guess she will 4Eva only no

she would go down Ally's just 2 be alone
the streets was so cold but was like her home

she would listen to her silent footsteps
as she would walk
and hear her lonely voice as she would talk

this is the life of a troubled girl
that was never none
and now she will 4ever just want 2 sleepin her grave stone

hey people please comment i no its not that good but i would love 2 no what you people think

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This poem was nice!!!

    i loved this parts

    "she would listen to her silent footsteps
    as she would walk
    and hear her lonely voice as she would talk"

    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by *fading*away*

    Full of emotions, and I can relate totally..one of the best writes that made me feel so *sad*...Well, nice write though! Keep writing....
    XOXO

  • Again, a very powerful poem. your writing is so emotional and great!!!
    keep writing, and know one thing, we are never truely alone.