I liked this very much. You have a lot of talent. Keep up the good work.
Great name btw, lol.

P.S Thanks for the comment.

Great job!! this poem flowed so well. the idea of the poem is magnificent. keep it up.

This was so awesome I couldn't stop reading it, I loved the way it was written. We all want something better but sometimes were afraid to leave what we have behind just incase we somehow realize it's all we really needed all along. This was truly an awesome write 5/5 for sure

Nicely written... at first I didn't really like the repetitiveness; but then I realized that it's more of a song lyric then a poem, which sheds a different light. I loved how you started off with a confused state of mind, not sure of anything at all and closed off the piece by answering all that you questioned earlier with your answers. Good write. 5/5

Very nice. so much emotion throughout. i enjoyed this. the 'chorus' was awesome. loved the last line of it. 5 for you! -beav

I really like this.. the emotion is wonderful.. a very heartfelt poem.. the only thing is its more like a diary entry than a poem.. but still a very enjoyable read.. great emotion :D

OH MY GOD!! i love this, its so goood!! i love how you repeated some stanza's it made it sound sooooo good.

i love this stanza..
"I'm turning my radio up so that so you can't hear me cry
I'm dancing in the rain so that you can't see my tears
I'm laughing like I mean it so that you can't see my pain
I'm saying that I'm fine so that you think I am
I'm trying so hard to push you away so you don't have to stay with me"

especially the one the one about the rain :] the emotion was fantastic.

GREAT JOB! keep it up i loved reading this poem :]