Drip, Drop, Splash

by Allison   Jan 14, 2006


Drip, Drop, Splash
This is the sound of the rain
As it slowly hits the earth

Drip, Drop, Splash
This is the sound of my blood
As it hits the floor

Drip, Drop, Splash
This is the sound of my pain
Subsiding in its liquid form

Drip, Drop, Splash
This is the sound I hear
As my life slips slowly away

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    *nods head* Great job!! Loved this one aswell =] loved it how you described drip drop splash about different things. It was good!

    luv natalie x-x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    The repeating of the first line is very effective. your a very good writer!!!

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Maria

    That was brilliant anouther great piece of work..

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey!! thats a great work..really liked it!!

    take care and stay strong
    all the best
    Nitin Mongia

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