Hey!! thats a great work..really liked it!!

take care and stay strong
all the best
Nitin Mongia

That was brilliant anouther great piece of work..

The repeating of the first line is very effective. your a very good writer!!!

Ruby

*nods head* Great job!! Loved this one aswell =] loved it how you described drip drop splash about different things. It was good!

luv natalie x-x-x