Awwwwww what an adaorible poem. i swear this person is lucky for a person like u. to write so passionatly about this. i love how u wrote this poem with the efficionate pattern seen. i havent seen a poem like yours its very unique. keep writing becaue ur doing a good job so far. and i am very ancious to see what you are going to write next.o and if its not to much to ask can u check out my featured poem meek i would like to get some feedback on it:P.

p.s. its an aweosome poem keep writing.
sonia

Nice, I think I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real you’ll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotion’s. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.